Saturday, October 20, 2012

Raining...a poetic haiku

This is a repost challenge that I did to come up with a haiku based upon the photo provided (please note, this is not my photo).
  Haiku is a poetic form of poetry originating from the Japanese. Haiku themes include nature, emotions or experiences.  Haiku follows a specific form:
First line: 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 syllables, and 3rd line 5 syllables.
(2012 Note: I flubbed the haiku but like the result anyway)

Here is the photographic inspiration:

RainingBy: Michelle R...aka Naila Moon of the Gray Wolf
Sweet kisses upon my skin

Carefully enraptured in the dance of life

Rain pours forth in passion


  1. So much emotion in so few words. Great creation.

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