My Fiance
By: MR aka Naila Moon of the Grey Wolf
Written June 16, 2012...All rights reserved
There he was,
he looked as fine as the last time I saw him.
My, that blond hair and those blue eyes.
Oh, he still makes me swoon.
He saw me from across the room
and started walking toward me.
That swagger of his,
that same confidence he always had,
yes, it was still there.
Oh my, what would I say to him.
Had it really been a decade since
he left me at the altar?
Yes, but still…
I wanted him so.
Just one little word from him and…
Here he comes closer!
Hello, been a long time.
Let me introduce you to my husband.
Ah, the best revenge. Happiness!
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Powerful ending...great job.
ReplyDeleteInteresting. My take on this is completely different than Sue's. I thought he was introducing his husband to her. LOL
ReplyDeleteI did not originally write it with that thought but I can see how you could take it that way too. Interesting! lol
DeleteAhahaha...perfect!!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Ah, to be a fly on the wall and see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteNo kidding!
DeleteWe should all be so lucky!! Great take on the prompt!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative use of the prompt! I always love seeing what you come up with Miss Naila!
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry my friend, but it sounds like an old 60's song. When I was reading it I thought of (remember) Leader of the Pack. I'm not making fun really I'm not, but it's a concept for sure.
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